I really liked these sentences: "The dryness preserves things, things that would otherwise rot in the moisture; they just sit there, just as they were. A hundred years may pass but the cup on the table, the flower pot on the porch, the morning newspaper on the kitchen table.....they just sit there as if the residents left ten minutes ago."
Maybe Stephen Leslie should use more commas instead of ellipsis'. For example, "Every once in a while I stop and listen.....for the sound of gunfire....but today is quiet."
Also, capitalizing Great Lakes in this sentence: "One day I know the supplies will run out.....and I too will have to follow the Interstate north to what is left of the great lakes."
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